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conceptually this is very fun! i think you took a solid core conceit and explored it well. feels like a 90s point n click game scenario that would kill me til i ragequit. the bride soaking in the bath not knowing the final discovery is such a sad image. she's so close!

i think i'm not reading the intro text right. it describes the final discovery, then points you to the secrets table, but i'm not sure why - that discovery (understandably) is not one of the listed secrets. what connection am i missing there?

i'll echo some comments below - the way you cut off the letter doesn't quite land. it's like a GM-only joke that doesn't work for players lol. i know my friends are opening that thing minute 1 and i'm gonna have to grit my teeth and bullshit about it getting wet in transit or something. 

high: the soul overlap in the lab animals adds a lot to the eerie tone and seems fun, easy, and effective to play. my favorite detail is the ant-like mice. i would've loved to see you explore that more with something grotesque - a thief who drank an animal's soul and can barely function, a cat with the surgeon's soul cutting open its prey, stuff like that.

low: ditto the person below asking for more contrast - the chaotic folder aesthetic is cool and well-realized, but all the overlap without any depth feels too busy imo. the map is especially rough although i do respect you sticking with the blueprint look for the numbering.

in-between: idk why, but the marination hint on a big dumb post-it note in this otherwise crumbling house felt so out of place and incongruous to me that i googled when tape was invented to see if it even fit the vibe. turns out: 1845! that's crazy. i didn't recognize your game, 19th century surgeons.

Thank you so much for the indepth thoughts!

I felt so funny myself setting the letter like that lmao, I totally see the point but that one was a joke that didn't quite land.

The marinade clue was initially part of the secret table as a Special one listed for clarity, but I had to bite the bullet and leave it only on the room because of space and layout. It's a gamble: Players have to make that connection with the contextual hint of the letter to nail "the true ending", but 9 out of 10 the Bride and the Party are just killing each other.

And yeah, the Hollow Bride marinating herself is a deep irony, but maybe she already feels the need in her own body; that setpiece really helped cement the final solution.

Again, your thoughts are very kind and it really excites me to discuss this all indepth!