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A very cool Mausritter adventure! I really like the custom conditions and, of course, the GOATMORPH spell which had make me laugh when reading its description. I also like the creepy vibes and overall weirdness as well as the custom art and overall presentation.

I’ll go into more details as to what I think could be improved since you asked for it on Discord:

  • I find the font work to be a bit busy: there are a lots of fonts used, with varying weights and sizes, and sometimes a different font is used for the same kind of information (conditions VS spell of goatmorph for example). A bit more consistency would make it easier to process.
  • Some paddings and margins are inconsistent (stat blocks have no padding on the left, location 2 title has no top margin). These could use a tad of polish
  • The white-on-yellow used for locations keys on the map is really hard to read for me. I just noticed where the 4 is while writing this 😅
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I appreciate the feedback.

1.) yeah I’ll have to organize the font based on the paragraph style. Next time.
2.) yeah i tried to match the style of mausritters stat boxes. I still need to learn it more . I may tweak it around and it should be better than this. The text frames are hard to manage and trying not to make it too difficult to read. Should’ve use bounding boxes I’m new to this affinity program still. lol 

3.) yeah I’ll just use plain black. Makes it easier.

I’m glad you like my adventure.