I like this a lot! It does so much with so little! I appreciate that the players are simultaneously aware of galactic happenings and worries, but interface with 1980s technology, photocopied radar maps, and small town quaint horror.
Theming is on point!
Like the best of entries in this Jam, what I want out of this is *more* - these ideas fleshed out into a 16 or 32 page module.