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Looking very cute! I love the sprites, I love the concept. I'd go with the 2nd screen- the one with the restaurant menu on it, because it's pasta but also implies some kind of date, I'd change the menu font to something not in cursive because some people can't read cursive. The only thing I'm not into are the backgrounds. They look like doctored photos and I personally don't think real to life backgrounds work well with overly cartoony artwork. Other people might feel differently, but that's where I am with it.

Thanks for the feedback!  I should have specified in the above posts, but those are just placeholder backgrounds.  We have an artist who will be making actual backgrounds for the game.

I like the second concept a lot, too!  And that's a good point you made about the cursive, I hadn't thought of that.