The story was cool and I think you proved to have pretty good story writing skills. I like your descriptions that you provide, and a lot of the dialogue feels very natural (though there are some interesting moments). I also like the artwork you did. It reminds me of some of the backgrounds I would paint in illustrator for my scratch games. Very cool there, but I feel like there could have been a lot more interaction that the player could have had. The game feels very passive, but it was still cool. I mean just imagine the same story, but you can move around in a space or with more choices and stuff. Either way it was a great game. Keep making games!!!