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Hello! I tried in browser.

  • Anything confusing during the opening

Perhaps some sort of text panel before going into the shop to give the player an idea of what to do. I wanted to leave the shop but I could not figure out how, if there was a way. I read the controls in the game description and am gonna try to use the computer now I know that E lets me use and stop using the computer.

  • Controls, camera or interface issues

when I open the shop the First Sale Panel is covering what I think is my current money and the flip market text. Maybe it is because browser and I also know it  changes like a tutorial after you purchase something, this is not immediately clear.  In the browser version when reading the description for selling an item the listing side on the right(wasn't letting me upload a screenshot) the text panel with a description and the price specifically is cut off a bit for me

  • Bugs during buying, delivery, storage, listing and shipping

Start of day two there was some text going by in the bottom, I think some of the text may have gone by really fast and I could not read it in time?

  • Whether the core gameplay loop feels enjoyable

It is just a lot of reading for now, for me at least, maybe some way with pictures, icons or a comic to make understanding the core loop for a new player so they can do the core loop without needing to read too much?  I think if there is music, it was bugged for me but some idle elevator or brain dead music would be very enjoyable for a vibe while I do some logistics work. I can see this becoming something great! the core loop is nice, but I only made it to the 3rd day before I felt like there may not be much more for me to see. I suggest maybe add some random or fake random event that could happen at the night like first night a lightning storm or a dream or a knock on your door so there is some element of mystery or stress for the player when they end their day of hard logistics work! If you did have more that could come up in later nights let me know and I will go further through the nights. I am looking forward to your progress and can come test a future version if you would like! Keep up the great work :)

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Hey thank you for your feedback and the events are a great idea! I'm currently fixing UI issues such as the First Day panel covering information. There should be music hopefully it works in the next update for you :) I appreciate you taking the time to check it out and the point you raised about the Text leaving too quick is a good one, I did not realise that, I'll add it to be fixed. 


It seems like your playthrough did show you what is in the game currently - I am updating and working on it nearly every day so there will be an update very soon, I would love for you to be able to check it out. Give the game a follow if you would like to be notified about updates. I think the next one should be around the end of this week/mid next week. Thank you again for your great feedback!

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my pleasure

Hi there, I hope you're doing good! I’ve reworked the tutorial and added much more UI and sound feedback based on earlier testing. If you'd like to give it another go it is live now 

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I will return to the original questions

  • Anything confusing during the opening

It was nice to see the computer, and next interactable glow when first starting a new game. The highlights in the shop is really nice around the buy buttons!

  • Controls, camera or interface issues

No issues, things were pretty clear but it may be nice to move all the deliveries at once or make it more obvious when there are deliveries at the door, it was not super clear that I had an extra delivery at the door but I remembered I bought 2 games.

  • Bugs during buying, delivery, storage, listing and shipping

No bugs.

  • Whether the core gameplay loop feels enjoyable

It was great having some tunes now :) I made it to day 7 and died because I couldn't pay my landlord! It was a lot easier to make it through the days with the chill music!!

Great improvements.

Great that's good to hear thank you!