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I don't want to accuse anyone, but it feels like the text was made with AI, judging by the certain character's phrases and speech. Had too many hours talking with different AI, so for me it's quite obvious. No judging here, but I recommend to rewrite certain parts yourself, so it will look more alive and original. And certantly the grammar errors should be corrected in the future.

Despite everything, the art style used for both BG and characters is cool and pleasant to look at, add bonus for many different Naku's expressions. The whole novel's concept is interesting, the setting is for sure. 

I hope, if you'll manage to be develop all your projects succesufuly, remember that you have to be satisfied with them yourself. Good luck!:3

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They downvote you but you're lowkey might be right. I relate to what you've said, I also have a huge experience with ai chats. No way one moment it's all mistakes/missing words and written in a casual-ish style and the other the description gets literature style with all the proper grammar present. I'm not even mentioning how there's obvious popular quotes that ai like deepseek and ChatGpt often repeat over and over in their sentences.

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Thank you,  your points are quite valid. I was hoping that someone would also notice this and confirm my thoughts. You've done this even with examples ! But unfortunately, for some reason, some people tacitly disagreed with this, though I also noted that the author did their best in many other ways.  Apparently some people can't  read more than two sentences before making a decision.

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Hey I just want to jump in that I do follow the creator and one of their other projects, it's because they aren't a native English speaker and some things and wordings can translate weird and make it sound ai, and also translators generally can make things sound weird in general

I understand, it can be. Though I showed this game to some of my friends, and they found even more things that looks like ai generated text. I know this creator has many supporters, though it's a VERY devastating coincidence if it's just the case  translation then. Then it's just poorly written and main li doesn't have any particular personality and way to talk. Since he changes his speech's  manner every paragraph, making  it tiresome to read

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I talk to people regularly who use translators part time. This is very standard behaviour and by itself not indicative of AI. I don't know what you mean with "regular phrases". These AI bots are mostly trained on fanfiction to my knowledge and tend to overuse highly specific phrases in each individual case (except maybe the many Y/N base bots. Not sure about those). I don't interact with AI bots myself though. It's something I've noticed through YouTube passively over the years. They must have some dubious source at least, because lore mistakes are common. The Y/N centered bots, I've seen less of, but there seems to be a streak of being so over the top, it reads a bit like a comedy. Or perhaps a soap opera.