Hey I just want to jump in that I do follow the creator and one of their other projects, it's because they aren't a native English speaker and some things and wordings can translate weird and make it sound ai, and also translators generally can make things sound weird in general
I understand, it can be. Though I showed this game to some of my friends, and they found even more things that looks like ai generated text. I know this creator has many supporters, though it's a VERY devastating coincidence if it's just the case translation then. Then it's just poorly written and main li doesn't have any particular personality and way to talk. Since he changes his speech's manner every paragraph, making it tiresome to read