Thank you, your points are quite valid. I was hoping that someone would also notice this and confirm my thoughts. You've done this even with examples ! But unfortunately, for some reason, some people tacitly disagreed with this, though I also noted that the author did their best in many other ways. Apparently some people can't read more than two sentences before making a decision.
I understand, it can be. Though I showed this game to some of my friends, and they found even more things that looks like ai generated text. I know this creator has many supporters, though it's a VERY devastating coincidence if it's just the case translation then. Then it's just poorly written and main li doesn't have any particular personality and way to talk. Since he changes his speech's manner every paragraph, making it tiresome to read