thank you for playing my game!
i'm glad you think the dialogue is strong, haha! i find it easier to write than narration... though i'd love to do a narration heavy story in the future. build up those muscles, etc.
i'm glad you like the way i portrayed anita's dialogue with herself too. i often find internal thoughts contradictory, so i wanted to portray it as a conversation between two anitas. and thank you for enjoying the quotes too, wheeeeee...
i think the sources are worth a read. would love to create a reading list for the game itself bc there's more where that came from.