Thank you so much for all of the feedback <3
You're right that I explore a lot of ideas without circling back much. I had actually planned to write at least double what ended up into the game... a rookie mistake of over scoping the game lol. On my next game, I'm going to really focus in on one really punchy idea like the one you mentioned.
I'm glad you liked the humor! I feel like it's important to include because reading stories is supposed to be fun! It even makes the horror hit harder in my opinion.
Thank you thank you thank you so much for giving me such detailed feedback. Like genuinely, this is incredibly helpful. I hope to make another game sometime really soon :3