Alright so played through the whole thing between yesterday and today and I like to make overly serious reviews so here goes
I'll start with the positive, as well as a little preface because I'll be YAPPING
I really liked the story and I WILL most likely keep playing when updates come out.
Story's been pretty enjoyable, feels like a regular slice of life harem with characters that have actual personality, an MC who's not the cliché worthless loser incapable of anything just getting lucky because he's somewhat kind, instead he has character, has things he's good at without being a perfect mary sue, overall it's pretty well done.
I don't have many specifics here because it flows pretty well most of the time, I'll be most specific for negatives of course, but yeah it's been a cool story that you can totally appreciate even without the NSFW stuff.
Now onto the negatives and I know this side will be disputed, might also sound like a conspiracy theory.
I'll be straightforward the biggest downside is that some dialogue feel heavily AI. Not to say that I think the general plot is, but more so some parts of conversation here and there, as if they were ran through AI for a quick check maybe to make it longer or to correct mistakes.
The structure sometimes just screams AI, not so much in chapter 1.2 (both parts) but in 1.0 I could feel a lot of it, I do want to give you the benefit of the doubt but at the same time I feel it is very likely some sort of run through an LLM was made.
A lot of giveways are things like "that's growth" "that's progress" which alone would be nothing but it happens A LOT and it's a phrasing that AI loves, there's also the use of m dash which I haven't noticed much until I went to look at the character descriptions in Status
Mia does not have any, neither do Nick and Tim and reaching Yumi she doesn't have any either, but Jade, Suzzie and Airi all have a few.
I feel this fits with my theory of it being used in 1.0 but not in the prologue and 1.2 (or at least not as much)
As for miscalleneous stuff, there's a few typos I've notice 4 of them in part 1.0 but nothing bothersome
I'll keep playing the game, I don't think past usage should penalise you for future update if you stop using it(or if you never used it in the first place, AI mimics writers after all so that's a possibility as well)You probably won't take this review well anyway but I just wanted to say I don't have any ill will, and I enjoyed your game