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Out of all negative comments about all of my work in my life this is most definitely the worst one I ever received and the most insulting to me.

Every single line of dialogue in my game is hand-typed by ME.

I fucking DESPISE AI and any usage of it. ESPECIALLY IN CREATIVE WORK.
I even advertise the game as AI-FREE and completely made by me.

I get that not everyone has to like my dialogues, my writing style and my humour, but seriously asking me if I used ai for it is just the biggest spit in the face I got since I started creating this game and iam saying that after receiving many literal d3@th threats.

Writing stories, scripts, plots, and especially dialogues, was and is, one of my fav hobbies and every single new update takes usually 4 months to make because i spend around 2 months on JUST the writing. 
And I need at least 3 of my friends to proof-read the whole thing few times to catch the atrocious ammount of the typos that I do.

Sorry you don't like my writing or maybe it just doesn't hit the right notes with your style. That's completely okay and I understand that.

But I never used AI to write things for me and NEVER WILL.

If you decide to play the game more, maybe my style will hit the right tone for you sometime later in the story. But if it won't, then my game might just not be the game for you.

Idk why your comment (and few others) appeared just now and not 2/3/4 months ago like it says in them, but glad it did now.  
I often like to do jokes that play around the rules of typing the dialogues. Like purpouseful misspelling or breaking the 4th wall because of some word being written in some way. I did some of the jokes like that in the upcoming update.
Hopefully you'll like it, see ya then

I mean, the only interharem love is between girls and mc, any yuri things that were in the script were just one off scenes anyways, and now everything is optional anyways so idk if i will hit the exact notes you would like to be played, but i'm sure i wrote a hell of a script for 1.2 and it's gonna blow 1.0 and 1.1 out of the water.

Besides that, the kitchen burnt down. Hopefully this month the dish will come through.

Yeah, writing that is a bit funny cause my google doc freaks the hell out thinking I just can't hit the right letters or that my cat is jumping over my keyboard and i need to reassure the document that "No no, that blob of words is what i meant" hahah.
See you in 1.2 soon.

Either with the release of 1.2 which is soon, or like a week or two later. Depends how testing will go.

Any sites that provide a mobile version of the game download link are not safe because Goth Gasp has no official mobile port yet.
But like i said - YET.
Version 1.2 which comes out in few weeks from now will have the official android port.

"my comment came off rude or annoying in a few places"
It didn't lol

"how is making them optional going to work?"
Scene by scene basis, quick choice button

Glad, you're liking it so far. Hopefully it stays that way cause v1.2, which is coming soon, will raise the bar by 20 meters.

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About the changes :
Yuri parts were never meant to be something big here, I just added yuri side plot in prologue cause i like yuri myself and needed an excuse to use it in game so i added some plot elements that use it, but players asked for that to be optional so i made it optional, and i think everybody is happy now.
I don't see this as a big change at all.
More like quality of life update.

And the slight rewrite of v1.1 was made because the script was a bit rushed and I did some continuity errors (that feedbackers pointed out) and didn't flesh out Suzzie's character as much as I wanted thus i added few more scenes to show her real personality more.

So overall no need to worry. I know where I am going with the plot and I will not sway from my designed path.
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Thanks for amazing comment. Hopefully I'll see you soon after you play through 1.1.
Have a great day

Coming up in 1.2:  Painting, panting, bonding, venting, and lots of overspending.

Ok, lmao. Who unfollowed just now?

I will literally cry, thank you 🥺👉🏻👈🏻
You'll love version 1.2. The banter I wrote for scenes there is basically upgraded version of what I have now. And it's coming soon!

About typos:
Usually before every version my friend does a huge proofread and fixes most of the typos she finds, since I'am completely awful at this. But even she can't find them all so I collect the ones players find and fix them all in new updates.

Thank you <3
I'm almost done with the script, next version is coming in hot.
I will drop some sneak peeks soon to make the waiting easier!

It's getting worse and worse everyday. It's still the best platform for gaining followers out there and it's still one of the most popular social sites. I use it daily to check content from few gacha games I play and to follow people I like, so I decided to use it for GG as well.
If it gets to a point where its unusable I'll dip. But for now I'll stay. 

And don't worry about feedback tainting the game. I stated many times that I value and read all feedback - but I know where to draw a line between the one that is worth considering and the one that is not.
Game is in good hands and always will be, I can promise you that <3 

Hahahah, thank you!!!!!
I will drop an update soon that will add an option to switch yuri to roommates and everybody will have their pick if they want lesbian content or not.
i think the negative discussion about this topic will be over and everybody will be happy! Thanks for an amazing review.

I plan to translate the game to few other languages including spanish but that's a task for one of the future updates when I'll save up some money to pay someone to translate it.

I do not want to use some online translator tool because we all know how badly can they sometimes translate something so i need to hire someone to do it.

As of now no femboy/futa is planned in the game. Im focusing on introducing my full planned cast of goth girls which will take a while.

If enough people will want it tho - i can consider adding some futa SIDE CHARACTER apart from the main story sometime in the future.
But i leave that to the voice of the people someday.

I plan to release them as soon as i can. Right now i juggle coding with two jobs to keep me alive and not homeless so it takes me a little more time.
1.1 Update is planned to release in December and I am doing my best to deliver. Worst case scenario its january but i will try as hard as i can to deliver it this year.

One lesbian scene that happens 3 years in the past, added as a plot set-up, made a few people mad.
I made it optional and moved on. I think all's good now.

Besides that I got many nice comments and feedback and I am having a blast making next update now. :D

Thank you!<3

Yep rollback will be added. Already noted on todolist.

I'll be awaiting your comments with great anticipation.

Can't spoil so much. You would have to join the ride and see for yourself hehe.

Tbh there were two more planned in the span of the next six updates. So rewrithing them for threesomes wasn't even hard. I can make the optional lesbian scenes if poeple would want them but that's a subjejct for 1.4 and 1.7. Nothing to bother about rn.

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Thanks! This means a lot. Really.
To be honest I expected like 3 people total to play the game and i got flooded with feedback and mostly nice words from people who actually read what i wrote. 
And yeah. It's first ever ever project like this. Can't wait to make it greater with each update.

I am going back to the kitchen soon.

Rollback noted, choices will be made better in 1.1 with small diffrent outcomes. Rn added them mostly so my adhd homie playtester would not whine about not having things to click. From 1.1 they will matter more. 

Jade and Noe intro got a rework and yuri was made optional.
Bdsm will definitelly be both ways. Dom women are my kryptonite. 

Bout map. Yeah... i am thinking about it heavily after feedback on my writing and people liking it. Probably the way to go is add semi open sections in some plot points and leave the open world free to explore when the story of the update ends.

I will deliver like a 1 dollar tier for people who just want to see some release posts and discord access, to not accumulate spam accounts.

Thanks for a nice feedback. Can't wait to deliver more.

I made all yuri content optional so it's all resolved now.

Lesbian content has been made optional so everyone can enjoy the game the way they want. I want everybody to be satisfied with the game not just half of the players so I think It's all good now.