Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a detailed response. We are really glad you enjoyed the characters, art, story, and the more intimate scenes so far. Your comments about Moonie, Lazuli, and even the teachers definitely made us laugh too!
Your critique of the prose is completely fair. When we first started developing the game, several reviews mentioned that the MC's thoughts, descriptions, and emotions did not always translate well, which could leave some scenes feeling shallow. Since then, we have been working hard to find a better balance!
Some players want more internal description, while others prefer less, so we are currently aiming for something in between. Our goal is not necessarily to make the player feel exactly what the MC feels, but to make his emotions clear and believable. If something makes the player angry while it makes the MC sad, but the writing still helps the player understand why he feels that way, we would consider that a success!
We still have plenty of room to improve, so feedback like this is genuinely useful. Thank you again for giving the game a chance and for sharing both your praise and criticism so thoughtfully!