Glad you enjoyed it!
I will say, Harriet did address the power dynamic, but it might have been vague with how she worded things (ie. the harassment comment, or saying "you don't have to do this just because she's your boss" or something to that effect. I did mean to have Mackenzie have a deeper thought process on that and talk abt it w Harri, but forgot to put it in my outline and so it is lost to the ether.
That being said, I purposely didn't have as much interactions with other characters to make the mc's world feel smaller, or more isolated. I can definitely understand the end choice feeling somewhat abrupt, since I was pushing time to get it finished, lol. BUT, the choice feeling like it's coming from the player rather than the mc was actually on purpose.
As for the technical stuff, I don't know why the music did that. It worked when I did my run through before submitting, but the coding must be a little wonky since I wanted to use a fade affect. They are meant to fade into each other, but definitely not both play at the same time/volume. Whoops! Also, I took out the menu titles due to other coding roadblocks I bumped into. I didn't know if that would be a noticeable preference.