Thank you so much!
I'm taking a short break from vns, but I'll be sure to check yours out when I come back to look through the other submissions!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Wordy beginnings are definitely something I struggle with, trying to find a balance between set up and remaining concise. I'm glad everything seemed to work better/clearer as the story went on. I've definitely considered touching the script up a bit outside of a game jam deadline.
As for Bones, I'd hoped the second scene would have maybe looked like she was sitting on the counter but I guess I could've just had the dog on the bar stool again, lol.
Glad you enjoyed it!