Hey, just wanted to comment the following: Thank you for making the protagonist someone I can genuinely root for. Sauve, charismatic, good everyman. A real keeper.
Now I may have a soft spot for Bond, for the Nathan Ford bad boys, and so on. But this character's nice. He's also not a push over, which is another archetype I dislike, firm when needed, funny when needed. Good dialogue, good job. 5 stars. Hope you get lots of support!