I like it but I hate the fact the your landlord ugly as shi# you all know even the game isn't finished you know what will happen to the landlord in our MC girl (our girl is really desperate so she end up in ugly guy in my guess) while I'm playing this. I feel disgust not because I hate it, its because landlord is ugly character you end up with.
Maybe make a landlord so handsome because the MC girl is cuter and sexy she deserves a perfect match for her
But still your game design and story (is good) I feel like it's come on real life but sadly she end up with landlord situation (I'm guessing)