I played it again and it feels smoother, I still died at lvl 2 and I tried 3 times. I am a lousy gamer I trust :(
Saying this because I couldn't see/read any new in-game msg. If I recall it correctly, during the jam the initial text said "...beyond these walls" instead of "room". I liked the previous wording better.
The design of the end scene/cheating scene feels more natural. I still think that your dialogue needs improvement. To be certain, though, I would need to come to that scene by playing through the levels and not "cheating" my way there.
Overall and even you not continuing with the game, I think you did good in caring enough to give it a polish!
Congrats on your work!
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Yes, the text in previous version said 'wall' instead of 'room'. There are additional messages in place before the final room notifying the player that the next level / current level will be 'room' and the AI face is the 'machine' the description tells the players about. (Tip :- you can beat the game by equipping both weapons and strafing and jumping while fighting enemies, I have made the projectiles as well as hitscans from turrets easy to dodge, although the player has to be careful at the platforming sections). I appreciate your feedback, I will look more into writing tips to make the dialogues better for any of my future games. Thanks again for playing !