I never know what to suggest when reviewing games that are story based, and this game is based. But I like every thing I saw, it felt very complete. I didn't have time to get to an ending (I got to the area with the depressed child) but from what I saw of the story I liked, and the world you've built is very interesting. All the art is very good, I think maybe the text boxes and the wave box could maybe do with a once over so they're a bit more thematic. But yeah, cool game.