Hey! I hope you are doing well.
I give a listen to all of your tracks, and while they are good, I have some issues mostly with mixing part. This is my opinion, so don't take it too seriously.
For Demon's Pulse, when all instrument plays together, the frequency crashes together causing the low-end to be muddy. I can barely hear the synth bass at all. I suggest you to cut unnecessary low-end. Also, I think the bright lead is a bit too loud for me.
For Look Deeper, the choir could be wider, and during the string section, I wish the bass is louder and the string could be wider. I don't know if that is what you are going for but it feels too mono and lacks impact for me. Like, the epicness, if you know what I mean.
And the theme, I'm sorry but I can't find the correlation between them at all. I believe these songs goes better for more ancient theme.
Lastly, this is not related to the rating but I saw a screenshot where you automate the main track fader. I recommend you to instead use "Utility" stock plugin in Ableton, standard version should have that. You can use that to automate gain and pan without messing with main fader. Also, stock EQ have left-right EQ or mid-side option. Try use them.
Yeah, that's all. You did well :)
Edit: Spelling error