This was pretty well done. I especially liked how you did the visual transitions moving through The Cave et cetera. And the writing what I read of it was fun. Here's my piece of advice you need to let people know this is a visual novel right from the start on the game's page. I skipped through a big chunk at the beginning trying to get to the actual game play not realizing that I was actually skipping the real content. Nonetheless I started reading midway through and thought hmm this is actually pretty good.