The story was pretty interesting at first but I realized my choices didn't really matter ? I either just won a bunch of money or lost a bunch of money but my daughter still left me. Maybe that's what you were going for? The House always wins etc? It made me a little disinterested tho :(. The gameplay was a little buggy and the font is a little hard to read for me :c
I think it had a lot of potential but I wasn't really able to engage with the narrative that well. The music and vibe was sad and if I forced myself I could've been more affected by the game but I sadly think something was missing, maybe feeling like what I was doing mattered at all? Or some actual interactions at the end of the day, I'm not sure. I won a LOT very easily so that didn't really help either, sorry (I got like 200+ bucks).
I still think it's a great concept and some people might engage with it better than I did so good job and good luck with any future projects :D