Super well-done.
I think what I loved most about this is how "complete" it is -- it felt like you wanted to do a very specific thing, and you did it. Great job scoping this project and seeing it through -- it felt very solid that way.
Atmosphere was great, the visual effects were good, and I really appreciated the judicious use of styling. It felt good.
You illustrated your chosen concepts really well, and it felt like visual and interactive poetry. Great artistry that way, and the interactive elements enhanced that nicely.
It was nice that objects held multiple descriptions as you interacted with them later -- either a second time in a row, or after other game events happened. That felt like well-done interactive fiction.
I liked the topic, the message, and the execution. Overall, very very well done!