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Very valid points. In my storyboard, this should have been much longer to let the effect sink in - but I also wanted to have it as a short experience. But even now the story could continue with Emma and this only serves as setup. One part I’m not entirely satisfied with is that the revelation, that the model is cursed, leads to the death too quickly. The basic idea was to create a sort of “The Ring” with LLMs. This also explains why Simon now has access to Simon’s real memories. The model now serves as a gateway to the afterlife. And the monster basically is an entity that roams the afterlife.
And the fact that your name is similar to Jana Stern’s and that you work with LLMs is really funny. :D