💕💕💕Yessss I’m loving everything so far, and as I writer myself I can totally see the way your brain was working. Giving a character a lot of power and an intuitive way to use it is quite hard to write around by nature bc everyone’s “logic” for problem solving is just as different as our pure emotional tendencies, which is why I suggested giving a mechanical reason as to why she held back so we don’t have to jump through any mental hoops.
Ofc, I get not wanting to disturb the story, but being found as a witch kinda already takes that away so it felt like preserving something already out the window. But!! The story is already really good without it and I think it’s not something that’ll be noticeable later in the story. It’s just a starting point thing and the story is already really good 🥺💕
And this isn’t a critique or anything but am I suppose to kinda see why wearing a disguise lead to her capture and not wearing it didn’t? Cassian had already seen her face by that point so I thought he’d have more of a hostile reaction if it was obvious the witch was out as in broad daylight vs a girl who might be her, where then he would test her and stuff. For a second I thought I got the options flipped. But maybe it’s suppose to be a mystery for now.
I see that it’s divided into days as well, do we know yet how many there will be? ?