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A nice little story based on the cool concept of reversing some old fairy tale tropes! It's fun to imagine what happens next after the endings

SPOILER BELOW

The hunter's story is quite easy to get, he's a bounty hunter who decided not to kill "The Wolf" bc he developed the hots for her. And he either kidnaps the MC or gets kidnapped by her depending on if you can charm his guard down enough. I like how it feels logical for high affection to lead to a successful kidnapping. 

The lamb...I'm more confused about. The twist is that he was trying to meet The Wolf purposefully and have them take him away from the town that he hates. But also he's been the one bringing her victims? Not sure how he knew there's a cute killer/why he got infatuated in the first place when people can barely tell if it was done by the same person or not, and that's after he started bringing in the victims himself. I feel like there's a lot of interesting things going on with his character that couldn't be fit into a short game. Which is a shame bc he's lowkey the one I'm more into -//v//-

◟(๑•͈ᴗ•͈)◞ Omg so excited!! Please accept my humble tip of $5 as I go off to the play your other game now!! It’s been on my to do list, but this one drew me in as a fellow pink hair and purple eye contacts wearer, your art so pretty I love our witch 💕💕💕

💕💕💕Yessss I’m loving everything so far, and as I writer myself I can totally see the way your brain was working. Giving a character a lot of power and an intuitive way to use it is quite hard to write around by nature bc everyone’s “logic” for problem solving is just as different as our pure emotional tendencies, which is why I suggested giving a mechanical reason as to why she held back so we don’t have to jump through any mental hoops.

Ofc, I get not wanting to disturb the story, but being found as a witch kinda already takes that away so it felt like preserving something already out the window. But!! The story is already really good without it and I think it’s not something that’ll be noticeable later in the story. It’s just a starting point thing and the story is already really good 🥺💕

And this isn’t a critique or anything but am I suppose to kinda see why wearing a disguise lead to her capture and not wearing it didn’t? Cassian had already seen her face by that point so I thought he’d have more of a hostile reaction if it was obvious the witch was out as in broad daylight vs a girl who might be her, where then he would test her and stuff. For a second I thought I got the options flipped. But maybe it’s suppose to be a mystery for now.

I see that it’s divided into days as well, do we know yet how many there will be? ?

Genuinely head over heels obsessed with the game!!! Foaming at the mouth to wait for the future days rn and trying to stop myself from writing my own version of the story in my notes app to cope with not having more (personal bad habit). LOVE IT KEEP IT UP ILY <33

Granted there were moments where I was shouting at the MC to use her powers bc she's a whole god and it doesn't make sense sometime for her to be so non-resistent. I think that maybe a good way to write around this is have her struggle with using magic if she's panicking/scared (the moments that I yelled for her to use her magic were when Cassian was confronting her so I think its reasonable to be panicking). It doesn't have to be a hard rule, she can still break through for plot purposes but just to give us something to hold onto when we know she can use her powers but doesn't? 

Like...when she was in the square, it was already worse case scenario, the witch has been discovered in public, why not just freeze everyone and book it to the country side? She already fucked up.

And the moment with letting frost bloom...I guess she wanted to be polite to Cassian but idk he kinda man handled her and clearly knew she was awake, probably would have frozen him to the ground and make him promise to keep his mouth shut or else I turn him into a popsicle as I flee the kingdom...

(Also idk if it was an artistic choice, and sorry for being a grammar police but I think the more proper wording/syntax match for Ash’s profile dialogue would be  “Why did you only listen in silence while my world shattered, piece by piece?” 

Or “When my world was shattering piece by piece, why did you only listen in silence?”  which I actually like more bc of the way weight and emphasis is distributed this way. Less chance of a run-on feeling.

I think it’s more common in English to use ‘while’ when referring to a clause that’s the second half of the sentence, and ‘when’ is used more as part of the first clause…or maybe that’s just me 😭 sorry for being annoying I promise it’s only bc I’m obsessed with this game already 🥺💕💕)

EDIT: neither are grammatically wrong, the clause is not a hard rule, the off feeling came from definitions of the word; while emphasizes the entire duration of an event, whereas when focuses on the starting point it happened. Since “pieces by piece” describes an ongoing process, “while” kinda matched better. However, combining when with present tense language (shattering) makes it focus on the entire duration without using while.

(don't let the downvotes scare you! Someone's just being really bitter, this is a good time if you like yandere stories!! You can literally play it for free and it starts off with a warning screen)

Lowkey kinda scary, not just with the jump scares but also in how I think it's the most realistic yandere I've seen in media! Pathetic, needy, self-loathing, obsessive, yet has his unique charms to make the player tolerate and even dote on him.I certainly saw the vision somewhat and understood why the MC wanted to stay with him before knowing about the murders.Tho I think I would have put my mean face on and force him him to pick up proper hygiene if he wanted to touch me lol.

My theory and interpretation of Brahms's character is that he was never a good person even in life, and he's very self aware of that. But becoming a pocong made him worse. He had plenty of chances to harm the MC when he was alive but never did, yet once he was a spirit, he was willing to cross that line. That's the real difference between the living and the dead Brahms imo. Not a good person either way, but I do believe he loved the MC, and as human beings we can be very shitty to those that we love. 

RIP at least they are all equally grey between the shades, I was struggling with the lighter tones as well as a pale little bastard TvT

Gosh yeah, and I think remember all the bangs being straight but only one back hair being wavy? And they’re mostly very short, I mean, I have short hair irl but I like my otome MCs to present a bit different from me a lot of the time ^^;;

So far I only saw the customization come into play during one scene. I wonder if they plan to do more with it in the final product. I’m so fucking obsessed with Anthony it’s not even funny but the other two aren’t my style, so I can’t decide if it’s worth it to get the full game rip 🤧

WHOAA I played the demo last year and almost didn’t recognize the game with the new art!! Everyone looking gorgeous!…Well actually the MC I have slight issue with tbh (I’m assuming the customization at the beginning is for the MC???), I’d like to play as a woman but all the customization options make them look like a man/pretty boy 🥹 And the palest pale tone is straight up grey??? I hope the final product can let me live my pastel girl x goth boy fantasy with Anthony 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

I'm sorry if this sounds like I'm rushing you, it's just that I am REALLY excited for this game but...do you have a rough estimate for when this might come out? It doesn't have to be super accurate!

Yes I’m sure I will! Ending 3 was the first one I got and I’m itching to have some free time to get all the others. Thank you for your permission as well! It’s probably going to be a smut with feelings type of gig given how suggestive the ending was, so i guess I’ll let you know if I do it if you’re fine with that kinda stuff. Can’t wait to see the rest of the game when I’m freed from life 💞

I just finished getting one of the endings and holy crap Rudy is gonna rot my brains for the rest of this month at the very least. This fussy man brought out the worst in me frfr, ending 3 was everything I wanted and I might just write fanfic to 'flesh out' our cute couple if the creator don't mind...I think it would especially be fun to write things from his perspective, from the day they met to all the things that went on in the game. Thank you so much for making this, I knew it was the right call to log back onto itchio when I was feeling stressed from school and life, the algorithm did me a good one tonight!! <3

Edit: Donated some money just now bc woww,major respect for dropping this gem completely finished and free. I think this is first time I've done so on here, all the other time has been for DLC or soemthing

Ooo, I was wondering if the CGs were going to be cleaned up for the final release but was too embarrassed to ask if it wasn’t lol. I’m so hyped for this gorgeous experience 

Omg I just realized which character the hunter reminds me of here! With the fur, the hair cut, and even the expression he looks like time-skipped Dimitri from FE3H. Literally such a bonus <3. How many chapters do you plan to have for the full game??

I adore the atmosphere of this game—it just lights the artist in me on fire with inspiration and I cannot wait for the full release! I preferred playing up the sweet damsel more so the bold and hope that both variants can find success in the full story so long as we make smart choices. Again, wonderful job and I can’t wait! ♥️♥️♥️

I have been WAITING for an otome game with this premise omg, the idea of the two different modes is very intriguing and I cannot wait for my socially hopeless self to die over and over again. I usually am scared of bad endings but am guessing that, with so many of them, they won't be too heavy to go through. I feel that with villainess isekai stories, a lot of the fun comes from remembering the plot and finding ways to alter the story in our favor, having that foresight and being one step ahead, but our MC has amnesia and don’t know much. Either way I look forward to how the team makes this work as a game! Thank you for starting this project, I can barely wait for it!

I think you were literally the reason I actually found this gem because I only look under those tags, thanks a million lol! 

I randomly decided to start playing this demo a bit after 12AM a few days ago, ended up laughing until after 1 in the morning and still craving more. Super charming game with lovely music, beautiful art, design, and extensive character customization. Major props to the devs for releasing the demo and having the game ready for release in a few short months instead of making us wait without a release date! And the fact that it is free?? I pre-ordered the DLC the same day as I played the demo even though I am short on funds(broke) because this game really deserves it. Grim is such a cutie and definitely scratched an itch I had within me for white-haired men dressed in black who unintentionally come across as an edge lord despite being kinda a goof. An itch I didn't know I  had which is even BETTER! Can't wait for December 7th!

I love the game so far! But I have a small question, in the description of the game on itch.io it says that the full version will have more love interests but the kickstarter only lists additional interests if certain goals are met, which one will it be? I ask because G# and Sid were arguably my favorites, G# especially I feel like you outdid yourself on his design wow!

I love it so far! But there seems to be an occasional bug where after I click on an existing file in the Save menu, it loads instead of saving. Similarly, in the load menu when I do the same it asks if I was sure I want to save over it. Still can’t wait to see the final product!