first of all I really dig the artstyle , it's so amazing , one of the best in the jam if not the best
The dialogue was very nice and the game was short and sweet
I really liked the game , not for the feedback since u asked, here is everything i recommend:
- The dialogue looks awesome as well , maybe pitch shifting the dialogue sound would have made it a lil bit less irritatable
- giving the platforms one way collisions would have been very cools since they look kinda thin
- for the clicking on the platforms area u can make it so that clicking on the already horizontal platforms reverses them back so it makes the game feel more interactive and stuff
- Also i would advice making it so that if u click on any background stuff it do smth like clicking on pipe -> pipe sound / gas coming out of pipes and stuff
- dialogue being only text was a bit boring kinda so tweening the dialogue ui out and into screen / making the character keep squishing and stretching back would be a very cool tip if u cant animate them ( or do both)
- the buttons at the beginning in the main menu may need some sounds for hover / click
But overall amazing game, I like it