A couple of thoughts about this:
The art is nice. I like!
The dialogue choices don't often seem to line up with what I selected. I get that as a gag, but there didn't seem to be much rhyme or reason to the mismatches.
I feel like I "got" your game more once I realized there didn't seem to be a way to get to a "Good" ending. I'm unsure though, because it seems like it repeats from the female perspective afterwards, but the game crashed at that point. Did you not get all the content you wanted in?