I really enjoyed this! Great job on your first game :)
I enjoyed the music and thought it fit well with the gameplay.
Some things I think may improve the experience:
1. Audio and visual feedback when performing an action (prominently on the yarn drying phase).
2. Some variations in order preparation (ie not the same process every time). Idk what this would look like in terms of spinning yarn, but something to look into to prevent repetitiveness.
3. Perhaps there are some stakes involved. This may just be personal preference, but I'd want to be able to buy materials, dye, upgrade machines, etc and make profit for sending out orders.
I think you should definitely continue working on it!