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Here's the lore I've been thinking about and the reason why our Overlord targetted them specifically. I was thinking our boy is from a Earth-like planet that was ravaged so hard by the eaters. Feel free to expand into their respective guardian stories.

Nova Serena - Let the eaters 'live in peace' causing them to wreck havoc in space stations, colonies and nearby planets. Her reason is that these are just animals that have the same right to live as sentient beings.

Pyra Valeria - Extorts colonies and stations for protection money (resources) in exchange for dealing with the eaters. Abandons poor colonies that can't pay with tech or resources.

Glacia Yuki - 'Guides' eaters with black ops soldiers (so that she has plausible deniability in case they are caught) into other planets then feign ignorance when those planets suffer damage and loss of life.

Kessa Sundari -  Hunts moon-eaters and claims she is a powerful hunter (even if a well equipped squad can deal with these). She's actually scared of the bigger ones like planet-eaters and sun-eaters but hunts the lesser eaters so that others won't call her out.

Nyx Isolde - Too nihilistic to deal with the eaters as she saw both rebels and councils unleash the eaters on each other throughout the centuries.

That sounds great! I really like the direction you’re taking with this.

I’ll definitely be using parts of it in the lore, especially the Nova Serena angle. The whole “they’re just animals that have the same right to live” pacifist reasoning fits her character perfectly.

The ideas for the other guardians are also really good, but I probably won’t include most of them in the main dialogue. I want to avoid making the eaters feel like the central focus of the story. That said, I really like what you did with Nyx. In my mind she’s someone who was once a good person but eventually gave up fighting against the corrupt system. I can see her being forbidden from dealing with the eaters as part of the Obsidian Core’s war doctrine - letting them weaken smaller civilizations without the elites having to lift a finger.