Excellent feedback. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Yes, I mixed up my East and West for one of the exits in Rm 9. And Qitar was with 60 HP in mind (not HD) and I see how I could have made that more clear.
I do like your idea about how to handle 'paralyzed' characters, I agree that having players just sit and skip turns is generally a bummer around the table. I also try to keep them involved, maybe it is doing something with disadvantage, maybe they can move or attack, or do one thing, but the important thing is to keep them involved.
Anyway, I appreciate your insights and taking the time! If you do end up using any part of it, I hope it serves you well.