I really enjoyed this game. the art is simple but dramatic and the story is also really good. the only criticism is that the jumpscares are everywhere. I get what you're trying to achieve but please dont make 10 cheap jumpscares. it gets annoying as the game progresses. Instead, try to build tension first and then try to execute a jumpscare. That would make the game 100x better.
But overall, this is a really good game like no joke, especially for your first game. How did you do this? Which engine did you use? Cuz this is, in my opinion, VERY impressive. Added this to my collection. Good job!