I’m disappointed at how little material about the fey is actually in the book. You could strip out all of it and still have a perfectly playable RPG 90% of the size of the original.
Under Quickling, your pronunciation says Tylwyth Teg (which is Welsh for Fair Folk, a generic term for all fey), but your text says Tylwyth Flicker (which, if you actually said it to a Welsh person, would probably be understood as Tylwyth Flickr, “Flickr Folk”, i.e. people who use the Flickr website).
This is a constructive evaluation, thanks! Note, my intent was the release content modules going over the fey - my intent with the book itself was to be a slim as possible to get people going. The intro is entirely about running games in a folklore setting, but yes, of the 20 pages, only 5 deal with the setting, the fey, and how to run them.
The other 15 are rules, then 2 pages are character sheet, and 2 pages are the sleeve/cover.
I'll release modules asap then and attach them to this as a bundle.
Thanks again for the feedback!
