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I'm not a regular player of this genre, therefore, I'm not sure how much I can analyze it. 

First, the art, color palette and music blend very well together. I would suggest better contrast in the dialog boxes, and different text colors between characters, so is easier to follow.

At first, I found it very short. The 'Restart' give me a hint that I should probably choose different answers. That's how I got to a second ending. This part should be made more explicit at any ending: explain to the player they can play it again, so they found the different endings.  

Thank you for taking the time to play and comment on my game. I am really trying to work on getting better at designing UI, so I appreciate the critique on that aspect. Also, I changed the button at the end that allows you to restart the game so it says "Start Over" instead of  "The End," which will make it clearer that there are multiple endings. Thank you for your advice.