Really interesting concept! Not sure if it was part of the game or not but there was one game screen where it wouldn’t update or give me a way to the next one even after waiting like a minute and clicking all over.
Thank you! And that's totally my bad - I realized that I forgot to connect a handful of passages to the rest of the story, so that was probably one of them! It should be fixed now, though :) Thank you for letting me know!