Thank you so much for this, genuinely! Okay let me go through it.
The Izzie thing: you’re right and I’m fixing it. The first mention is her picking up the glass not drinking, but that’s clearly not reading that way.
The ‘someone refills a glass’ repetition: noted and fair. I’ll be more conscious of it going forward, I’m not going back to edit ch2 but it’s a good habit note for ch3 and beyond.
The Noah/Amber specific actions thing: also fair, and something I’ll keep an eye on. Again, not going back, but I hear you.
The drink option: I thought about it! The reason I didn’t is that by the end of chapter 2 there are already a LOT of choices and I wasn’t going to do much with a specific drink selection anyway. Also, non-alcoholic drinkers weren’t choosing between alcohol and water, there were non-alcoholic ciders and wines available too, so it’s not as binary as it might seem. Either way, there will be a mention in chapter 3 of dinner giving drinkers a chance to sober up before the evening, so it’s not just dropped. (For reference: only Anwar and Mattie weren’t drinking if your MC was, everyone else had something.)
The threesome question: it got scrapped for this chapter but it will be back later.
And the ‘you don’t drink but you should’ option 👀 You’ll find out.