Got outside the game glitching through a corner, 11/10 ign!
Haha just kidding :P Ok so, i see it's your first game, welcome to game jams! finishing a game in a short time is already a nice feat, and from now on it will only gets better, about the game yeah, i see you still need to learn, but i deeply appreciate the effort!
As for advice, as a veteran jammer myself, i would say, try to have visual/audio feedbacks for EVERYTHING, or... juicing as we call it, it makes a difference that's day and night, and actually in unity or other game engines it's really easy to implement (for unity you just need to call some UnityEvents and then you can configure all in editor!) curious to see if you guys come back for more jams! Congratulations on your first game!