I really liked it, I think the ideas fir characters were great, sometimes I did not understand how some of them (like the alien) really worked though. I have a but of an issue with the thumbnail though, instead of reading operator for the first time when i read it, i just read "perator" or "perdtor" and since I desperatley needed to find a word starting with p and having e r d t and o in it I read it as "predator" and thought it was about like dinosaurs ripping apart ferris wheels or something (this then changed when i read the title again though), apart from that i really like the art though