I really liked the introduction. I don't know how to increase my skills. I noticed my stealth improves when I rob people, I got to familiar without even trying. I liked that I had to buy the watch it is a nice touch. I stole a watch but could not use it which is... I am assuming Oliver Twist was part of the inspiration That is one of two things it reminded me of. When I was on my character screen there was a problem when I scrolled down the screen would jump back to the top. I got the contract. This is a good demo. Keep it up.
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Thank you for your feedback! You increase skills by performing skill checks, which are indicated by red pluses. The pluses also indicate difficulty. You're right to assume that I have taken some inspiration from literature in my story. I'd like to include references from literature and other mediums throughout my story in the future. I also appreciate you pointing out what you saw on the character menu, this will be fixed in the second update coming soon. I appreciate you for trying my game, it really means a lot to me! :)