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The style is awesome!
like others said the pacing of the tasks could use some tweaking.
Additionally, A quality of life update should be when the text loading is animating in, ; it should reveal itself fully whenever you hit the button. As some people read fast and waiting for it to come in took longer than expected. 

Overall I think this was  a brilliant idea that just needed a few more playtests before launch.
This could be expanded upon with more characters, and scenes as well. The world building would be fun here! 
Great work.

Thanks for the feedback! 👍 I really did want to add the text revealing in, but we unfortunately ran out of time. 
I felt like it could of been improved by a few more playtests and it would of been a really good fun game✨I guess that's how time crunches go though 😅