I had some doubts for the first half or so; the game felt a bit like some disparate scenes from a bigger story. But I was caught up with it before the last battle. The three characters are really likable, and seeing their relations evolve was satisfying. It was pretty cool to have a nice and stable throuple to root for. The VN really laid those death flags thick, maybe a bit too much to subvert them at the end (I was always a believer, though^^) The writing is mostly good, but does have a noticeable number of typos and little errors.
The presentation is immaculate; the sprites and CGs look beautiful, the music worked great, the UI as well, with different textbox background for each character and the custom cursor. Some elements couldn’t be finished in time, but it doesn’t detract for the VN. The skull on the textbox sometimes felt inappropriate, I guess^^ Kudos on the numerous accessibility options by the way!
The characters like talking about various stories during the VN, all taken from real life folklore (as far as I can tell). It’s interesting that the tales about animals are transposed to be about anthros instead. Some of the tales are then nicely paralleled in the story.
Overall, a great VN that excells in many ways. Excellent job!