That was lovely! The voice acting made the characters so much sweeter, and both of them did a phenomenal job. 🥰 I tend to speed through fully voiced stories, but I liked that lots of the inner monologue/narrator was quiet. When the voices popped in, I wanted to stop and listen, like they were a special treat. A very sweet story; I love a warm fuzzy romantic ending.
I think my one critique would be to cut down 50% of the screen shakes, like mostly saving them for stuff like Christina's health episodes. I'm biased 'cause this was my approach so take with a grain of salt, but replacing them with sprite-specific transformations would work for smaller dramatic effects so that the whole scene doesn't shake as much.