holy tiny font! love the art, the lava flow clock is a nice way to add urgency and make the mission dynamic, and i'm always down for big island representation and some bloodstained aloha shirts. weresharks and semi-immortals aren't quite on theme for "NO FUNNY BUSINESS", but the chopper stuff definitely is--a lot of air combat in this jam! great descriptive language throughout and some fun set pieces to imagine. though i'm definitely a pamphlet hound, i think this would be a lot more referee-friendly in a half-page format, and i'm not even sure my printer could accurately reproduce text this small... but if i keep it zoomed, this would make for a great time for vtt with my buddies on Oahu.
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Appreciate the feedback! I had a few printed to give out to friends and such. I think I'll increase the line weight on an updated version. We set out to give ourselves the challenge of a tri-fold and make it work. I disagree about it not being on theme. The FIST agents have totally insane traits most of the time, so a few CROs from CYCLOPS would also have crazy powers even if everything else is more grounded. I'll definitely do another pass and update the print version in the coming months to improve readability!