I’m fine if anyone gives a critique of my game, I’m always looking for honest and direct feedback on jams haha
I’m sorry to hear that the game crashed when you beat it, you are the 1st one to report this. I’ll try to see why it could happen but it’s a little strange since the last boss room it’s the same for all the bosses, I only change the enemy haha. I quickly uploaded the full gameplay I recorded last week for my trailer, you can see the ending but the quality is kind of bad https://youtu.be/0wgQqbGhyU4?t=1207
- I agree that the card menu is buggy. The selection buttons can overlap and there are more problems with the buttons and visibility of pieces. Also the lack of filters and basic operations makes the card system a tedious thing to do
From what people have said, I’m glad it isn't too broken to the point of being unusable, it’s annoying to use but at least it didn’t break as I was expecting. I’ll fix that menu when I back to develop the game haha
- I’ll change the name of “rate shoot”, I was thinking it wasn’t a good name all the time but because I was too tired all the time I was doing this, I just left it like that, there are better names for sure
- You are the second person to say that the thumbnail isn’t aligned with the game, I’ll check this later on. I made this cover because the game it’s just an introduction of Alice, probably the more I progress with the game, I could make another cover haha, and the narrative will be changed, from the feedback of people, this needs a correction in grammar and stuff
- Thanks for your suggestion on the visibility of the hurtbox
And Thanks for your long feedback and nice comment, I hope one day you can make a game you feel good with!
For me until recently I could do something I started to feel comfortable with and it’s my 8th game, also only could made this because I could give all the day to the game, the jam is longer than the usual, the feedback I got in my last game was useful for this game and I have some time doing drawing and programming, I’m surprised people liked the songs but before this and last game, the results were kind of ok or bad and barely got views and plays. Maybe my next game is bad and will be ignored but I can only say, keep learning and practicing, the results won’t be visible the next day or soon but one day it will show up, and you only will realize that when you look back haha, otherwise usually it feels like a bag of mixed results and failures due constantly going out of the comfort zone xD, but as long you are happy with what you did, I think that's enough for the day :)
Thanks for playing! ^^