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Which Theme did you choose to implement in your game?
Dark Lord's Wedding
Did you implement any of the Bonus Challenges? And if so, which ones?
I tried to implement a turtle but didnt get time so ig none-
Does your game contain AI-generated assets?
No
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Nice story. Interacting with things around the castle gave you some good background info about who Siri is and his relationship with his parents.
My one suggestion would be to change the aftermath of the barn battle slightly. The others warriors just letting Siri go on alone to fight the viper after she beat them up doesn't make much sense. I feel it would work better if the other two had been badly injured in the fight and were physically unable to go with him. I do not believe Viper would have deliberately hurt them, but maybe a ceiling beam could get knocked down in the battle or something.
Ah okii that honestly makes alot more sense! Ill put that in my rewrite of the game! And thank you for playing^v^
Awesome story game! Very engaging, well constructed and I very much enjoyed the twist at the end.
I really like the character dialogue busts. Did you make them yourself? They are both cute and sophisticated at the same time if you know what I mean and hopefully I did juxtapose myself there.
Just one small gripe - since this is a narrative driven story game with lots of text then I think it would benefit hugely from a quick grammar check. Just little things like the odd spelling mistake and not capitalizing single 'i' like 'I'. Honestly, it doesn't bother me at all but I know some people are picky about it in text heavy games like this.
Otherwise - great job, very enjoyable game!
Thank you i appreciate that and yes i did do the bust art^^
Also im gonna be real I tried to make sure the dialouge was correct but highkey gave up half way through, 1 because my dyslexia was pissing me off and 2 I didn't have time to proof read. I plan on remaking the game this month so this time I'll write it in an actual document so it can help me proof read.