Awesome story game! Very engaging, well constructed and I very much enjoyed the twist at the end.
I really like the character dialogue busts. Did you make them yourself? They are both cute and sophisticated at the same time if you know what I mean and hopefully I did juxtapose myself there.
Just one small gripe - since this is a narrative driven story game with lots of text then I think it would benefit hugely from a quick grammar check. Just little things like the odd spelling mistake and not capitalizing single 'i' like 'I'. Honestly, it doesn't bother me at all but I know some people are picky about it in text heavy games like this.
Otherwise - great job, very enjoyable game!