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I love stories that break OPR away from the GW lore that it was birthed from, and this one really seems to nail that using the lore we have for the factions. The dark elves have grit, but hope, and it's nice to see. There are a few sentences that read a little wonky, but overall this was a great read and the save at the end doesn't evoke deus ex machina like a lot of other works have. Raiders and bikers go hand in hand.

I'm a big fan of the lore Grimdark is rolling out, especially where it draws away from GW. Its what drew me into this contest. 

I tried to make the rescue an impossible save, using the extra words I could have set it up better. Thank you for reading.