Writing a narrative as a game unfolds always adds a little extra oomf. It was a beautiful story.
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I have come back to re-read this story several times and found I enjoyed it tremendously each time. The repeat of impossibility, can't speak properly, can't protect the Pegasus, can't save everyone, drives a terrific story with goodness at its heart. If there was a vote for our favorite in the jam, your story would take my vote.
