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One item of feedback. The cloud is very significant at the top of the tower, but it is not mentioned in the text. It's generally good practise to make sure that games are playable without graphics (GRAPHICS OFF), so writing something about the cloud would (1) be a clue for the player, and (2) be more accessible for players that play without graphics, or via the screenreading mode.

I had put a hint "Kids, beware of the wind of the storm that takes children away", but it's not clear, and a reference to the cloud is indeed missing in the text.

I've added clues for both clouds.